#31: “Mirror Village”

July 20th, 2009 | Categories: Daily Songs, Personal Favourites, Requests

“A mirror looks at another mirror” ~Dawa

I hope this story reads. I’ve never written anything like it before, and there are some big plot points that I leave unspoken. I hope it’s not too difficult to follow.

(YouTube link)

  1. Alex’s Mum
    July 20th, 2009 at 16:58
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    Wow that is so clever! It’s sad but lovely.

  2. July 21st, 2009 at 03:31
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    Thanks, Alex’s Mum’s Son’s Mum. :) I’m going to take this as a cue to break into a huge behind-the-scenes story:

    As well as having never written anything close to this before (in song form or otherwise), this is also the first time I’ve written a story in full before coming up with a single lyric. Even more unique is that I wrote it twice. Here’s the original story:

    The inhabitants of Mirrorworld once lived in peace; staring into one another was their greatest joy, as the resulting infinity tunnel made them feel close to God. However, they broke into factions over differing ideas about what lay at the tunnel’s end. One faction believed it was heaven, another believed it was another world like theirs, and yet another believed that it could logically be nothing other than their own world. Over time, these differences became irreconcilable, and the mirrors went to war. At the end, only one faction was left standing, but having shattered all opposition, they could no longer create the infinity tunnel, and realised that they had forever cut themselves off from God.

    There was of course a huge plothole here, which was that there was no reason the victors couldn’t have just looked at each other. So I had the idea of making the three factions into separate races – flat, concave and convex. A concave mirror could only create the infinity tunnel by looking at a convex mirror, and vice versa. The flat mirrors could indeed look at one another, but this caused resentment from the other two races, so when war began, the curved mirrors tacitly worked together to wipe them out, before fighting each other.

    But it turned out I was totally wrong about the interaction of the two mirror types, and there was physically no way that an infinity tunnel could be created like that. And even though we’re talking about a story featuring sentient mirrors, I couldn’t ignore physics, so I rewrote most of the story.

    In hindsight, the original version would’ve been a nightmare to turn into lyrics.

  3. Mika
    July 21st, 2009 at 12:55
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    Strange things come out of your brain.

  4. July 21st, 2009 at 15:17
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    Strange things go into it, so it’s not too surprising.

  5. Alexs Mum
    July 21st, 2009 at 16:51
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    Have you thought of writing a sci fi book? for some reason it reminds me of an ‘ender’ type story. I still think it’s very clever. Well done! :-)

  6. July 21st, 2009 at 16:54
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    I couldn’t do an entire book; even a properly-sized short story would be pushing it. Perhaps a musical?

    And yes, I was wondering how obvious it would be that I’ve been reading the Ender novels lately. Well-spotted. :)

  7. Alex’s Mum
    July 22nd, 2009 at 18:18
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    He he a musical would do it! Actually I’m not sure what it would do but then I am Alex’s mum x

  8. Alexs Mum
    July 27th, 2009 at 17:23
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    Oh Alex’s Dad liked it too….

  9. July 28th, 2009 at 08:36
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    After having read your comments, I must admit that I am impressed by how deep this story really is.